Intro

这一章，我将把所有步骤都分解开就像科学家分析人类基因一样

各种写词技术都会在各部分单独的，明确的进行阐述，你可以把所有的都阅读一遍，

也可 以挑你感兴趣的部分进行学习，有效的帮助你提高押韵技巧

1.Slant Rhyme（缺陷押韵）

说唱的基石是押韵，而一个说唱歌手就像一个画家，用flow把押韵的辞藻画在画布上

对某些人来说这是废话，但是作为一个说唱歌手，最好的成长办法就是选择更优秀的押韵

I start to think and then I sink

into the paper like I was ink,

when I’m writing I’m trapped in between the line,

I escape when I finish the rhyme

看看上面这段，这段歌词很好的说明了什么是一个rapper最酷，最精华的东西.

是押韵！

是押韵让说唱歌手自由的控制他的麦克风

是押韵让说唱歌手振奋所有听众

是押韵组成了flow的基石

Slant Rhyme（缺陷押韵）与 Perfect Rhyme（完美押韵）

下面是字典里对完美押韵的定义：Perfect Rhyme (noun):

Rhyme in which the final

accented vowel and all succeeding consonants

or syllables are identical, while the preceding

consonants are different.（懒得翻译了，百度百科查押韵）

完美押韵的例子比如说有cat, hat, bat; cake, bake, fake.

完美押韵并不仅仅是像上面的严格的拼写字数，而是他的发音,比如说

great, late; height, fight; bought, knot.

这些虽然字数不一样，但是依然属于完美押韵

完美押韵在很多情况下都能很好的应用，但是嘻哈音乐的改革者发现，这样

严格的押韵局限性太大，他们开始使用Slant Rhyme（缺陷押韵）来让自己更自由的说唱.字典里对缺陷押韵的定义如下

Slant Rhyme (noun):

A partial or imperfect

rhyme, often using assonance or consonance

only. Also called half rhyme, near rhyme, oblique

rhyme, and off rhyme.（懒得翻译了，后面说）

人们可以把缺陷押韵看成是“几乎押韵”例如：

heat, heart; cow, no; dry, died; love, fluff.

缺陷押韵意思是某部分发音相似，但是并不是完全押韵

{什么时候该使用缺陷押韵?}

任何时候，但是有些时候缺陷押韵并不是一种选择，而是必须要这样押韵.

1.当某些单词没有完美押韵时

英语中很多单词并没有perfect rhyme，比如说：

silver, purple, month,angst, sixth, breadth, ninth, pint, wolf,

opus,monster,dangerous, marathon, napkin, hostage, discombobulate

在Nas的一首名叫NY State of Mind的歌曲中，他用了一个无完美押韵的dangerous

但是他同样的能令这段歌词flow很棒：

I got so many rhymes I don’t think I’m too sane,

Life is parallel to Hell but I must maintain,

And be prosperous, though we live dangerous,

Cops could just arrest me, blaming us, we’re held like hostages

Nas运用prosperous, dangerous, blaming us 和 hostages来让歌词延续

但是整段歌词的flow却并没有受到影响

2.避免太过俗套的押韵

有些完美押韵已经被人用烂了，听起来让人乏味，最好就选择替换成缺陷押韵,比如

knowledge和college，人们已经不知道有多少次听到这对押韵了，为了避免这种

情况,我们必须用缺陷押韵，例如，knowledge的缺陷押韵-mall kids, honest,

ballas,taller, Paul Wall did, on it, admonish, cabbage.

很多歌手通过断句和flow来发音他们的单词，你甚至听不出来这些单词是缺陷押韵

比如2PAC的经典作品Changes

I see no changes

wake up in the morning and I ask myself,

is life worth living should I blast myself?

I’m tired of bein’ poor and even worse I’m black,

my stomach hurts so I’m

lookin’ for a purse to snatch,

cops give a damn about a negro,

pull the trigger kill a ni**a he’s a hero

Tupac, “Changes”

他的缺陷押韵，“ask” 和“blast,” “black” 和“snatch,” 以及 “negro” 和 “hero.”

Rhyme Scheme（押韵组合）

押韵组合是指在一段verse中，在什么地方设置关系到另一个单词或另一句歌词的韵脚.

例如最简单的一种.设置在每句的最末端，并且是AABB的形式

Rats in the front room, roaches in the back, A

junkies in the alley with the baseball bat, A

I tried to get away, but I couldn’t get far, B

cuz the man with the tow truck repossessed my car B

yme Scheme Notation（押韵组合注释）

一种用来匹配押韵和设置押韵的方法，将不同的韵脚用黑体，下弧线，斜体字来区分

例如:

Better plot for the paper,

we been living in the dark since April,

on the candle gotta get a handle,

my homie got a 25 automatic added to the camper

Ni**a get the phone book

look up in the yellow page,

let me tell you how we fin to get paid

（我艹，这个黑体斜体下弧线我没办法弄到百度了= =）

随着时代发展，我们已经不能使用那种老式的ABAB押韵组合了，

In-Rhyme（内押韵）

内押韵是一种简短的internal rhyme（内部押韵），内押是指任何发生在一句歌词中的一 对押韵，而不是句语句之间的押韵,它的作用很明显，举例

Moving quick like a pack of wolves hunting,

Telling all of these false haters to stop frontin’

这是两句没有内押的歌词，但是经过简单的换词，变成下列两句

Moving fast like a pack of wolves hunting,

Telling all of these fake haters to stop frontin

将quick变成fast，韵脚就与pack一致，同理，将false变成fake，韵脚与hate一致

简单的变化另两句歌词的flow产生了巨大变化.

另一种内押韵是将内押韵处理在下一句歌词中，例如上一句的尾部押韵，在下一句的开头继续出现。

yo the

whole state of things in the world about to change

black rain falling from the sky look strange

这两句歌词中 change 和rain以及strange构成一组缺陷押韵

同时state和things的发音也和change, rain,strange发音类似.

Multies（多重押韵）

现今的嘻哈音乐中，多重押韵应用的越来越广泛了，多重押韵的定义就是多音节押韵

多重押韵可以是双押，三押，四押甚至更多

普通押韵: cat / hat

多重押韵: my cat / hi-hat

多重押韵: bit my cat / hit the hi-hat

南部的一个说唱歌手Ludacris最喜欢在他的歌曲中运用多重押韵.他的歌曲有一个标志

就是在一句歌词结尾处通常会减速并且重读结尾的单词，而这个单词往往就与下一句结尾

构成一组多重押韵.Ludacris-[Number One Spot]

I’m never going nowhere, so don’t try me,

my music sticks in fans’ veins like an I.V.

try me与IV构成一组多重押韵.

多重押韵与内押韵的区别

内押韵:

Don’t be silly cover your milli I’m like Billy

Don’t be dumb cover your gun I ain’t fun

silly,milli billy构成一组内押韵

dumb,gun,fun构成另一组内押韵

多重押韵:

Punchlines that kill… my hits’ll bury ya,

I rap to myself on the bus like… schizophrenia

hits’ll bury ya与schizophrenia构成一组多重押韵.

如何写出漂亮的多重押韵

多重押韵其实并不是想象中的那么困难，只是需要花费更多的时间去寻找.

1.第一步，寻找一句你想要开始搭配多重押韵的歌词，例如

The elite force like army rangers and navy seals

现在，我们要创造一个多重押韵与navy seals进行匹配

2.寻找与navy配对的缺陷或者完美押韵.

navy的完美押韵:

gravy

wavy

navy的缺陷押韵:

maybe

baby

lady

rabies

weighty

3.寻找另一个音节的押韵单词，这个例子中就是seals

seals的完美押韵:

deals

eels

feels

heels

meals

peels

reels

squeals

steals

wheels

seals的缺陷押韵:

stales

whales

beans

4.将上下两部分单词惊醒自由搭配，寻找可以说得通有意义的组合，例如:

Baby meals,

Wavy eels

Lady squeals,

Gravy feels

Weighty whales

然后运用这些组合去勾勒你想要的句子.例如

A.I kick it operatic ‘til that fat lady squeals

B.Your lyrics are stuffing,so now I know how gravy feels

C.I’ll call you Gerber，cuz ya spittin’ up some baby meals

5.将这些句子拼凑起来，就组成了完美的多重押韵

The elite force like army rangers and navy seals,

I kick it operatic ‘til that fat lady squeals

your lyrics are stuffing, now I know how gravy feels,

I’ll call you Gerber， cuz ya spittin’ up some baby meals

重读与轻读

运用/和-来标注重读和轻读的单词，例如:

- / - - / / - - / - - /

Today is the first day of the rest of my life.

- / - / - - / / - - /

Behind my house is the most twisted of trees

这会有效地帮助你更好的处理多重押韵，因为有些单词很长的时候，你只需要在你重读的

音节上进行押韵搭配，而轻读的可以无视.例如上面的例子，结尾的三个单词是twisted of

trees，然而重读的部分只有“twist和trees,所以我们可以只针对这两个发音来寻找多重 押韵，例如：

Mystical knee

Listen to me

Mess with the bees

然后选择一个进行遣词造句，就得出了下列歌词:

Behind my house is the most twisted of trees,

I always ignore the birds, but I mess with the bees

在举一些例子，在EMINEM的歌词中（D12-MY BANK），有这么一句歌词：

/ - /

I just think you’re trying to steal the light from me

可以看出来中的的是light和me，所以再搭配多重押韵时，只需要注意Light和me

在接下来的歌词里eminem是这样写的:

I just think you’re trying to steal the light from me,

Yesterday Kuniver tried to pull a knife on me,

‘Cuz I told him Jessica Alba’s my wife to be

多重押韵之王

eminem是多重押韵之王.

最经典的作品就是The Real Slim Shady这张专辑.

在lose yourself中，有这么几句堪称多重押韵的经典

His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy

There’s vomit on his sweater already, mom’s spaghetti

He’s nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready

To drop bombs, but he keeps on forgetting

看看这段歌词中的多重押韵吧，多么牛X（6组多重押韵列在下面）

palms are sweaty

arms are heavy

vomit on his sweater already

歌名：8 Mile

歌手：Eminem

作词：Eminem

作曲：Eminem

It's okay, it's okay. I'm gonna make it anyway

没事的，无论如何我会办到的

Sometimes I just feel like, quitting I still might

有时我甚至想要，放弃我仍有能力做的

Why do I put up this fight, why do I still write

为什么我要（与命运）英勇搏斗，为什么我仍固执的在创作？

Sometimes it's hard enough just dealing with real life

有时应付现实生活就足够艰难了

Sometimes I wanna jump on stage and just kill mics

有时我只想跳上舞台，去吼爆麦克风

And show these people what my level of skill's like

并向这群观众展示我说唱的水平到底如何

But I'm still white, sometimes I just hate life

但我仍是个白鬼， 有时我会憎恨生活

Something ain't right, hit the brake lights

有时这些不切实际，（他说他能）吸引那些聚光灯

Case of the stage fright, drawing a blank like

事实上他会怯场，甚至害怕那些聚光灯

Da-duh-duh-da-da, it ain't my fault

Da-duh-duh-da-da，这并不是我的错

Great big eye*****, my insides crawl

惊恐的睁大了眼睛，我的内心在挣扎

And I clam up I just slam shut

我拒不开口，紧闭我的嘴

I just can't do it, my whole manhood's

我只是不能够做到，我整个人格

Just been stripped, I have just been vicked

都被剥去，我整个人都被撕开

So I must then get, off the bus then split

所以我只能下车，然后离开

Man ***** this *****t; yo, I'm going the ***** home

这该死的人生，我还要回那个凌乱的家

World on my shoulders as I run back to this 8 Mile Road

当我逃回八英里路，仿佛整个世界都在我肩膀上

I'm a man, I'mma make a new plan

我是个爷们，我已经制定了个新计划

Time for me to just stand up, and travel new land

是我站起来，去新环境去闯荡的时候了

Time to really just take matters into my own hands

是我用自己的手得到我想要的东西的时候了

Once I'm over these tracks man I'mma never look back(8 Mile Road)

我曾经超越过那些路上（碌碌无为）的人，我一定不能回头看

And I'm gone, I know right where I'm going

我要走了，我已经知道哪里才是我要去的地方了

Sorry momma I'm grown, I must travel alone

对不起妈妈，我长大了，我必须独自去探索

Ain't gonna follow the footsteps I'm making my own

再也不会沿着（别人）脚印走了，我要做我自己

Only way that I know how to escape from this 8 Mile Road

我知道的唯一的方法就是逃离八英里路

I'm walking these train tracks, trying to regain back

重走这些火车轨道，试着找回我曾经的斗志

The spirit I had fore I go back to the same crap

在我回到这个同样的滥地方之前

To the same plant, in the same pants

穿着同样的裤子，回到原来的工厂

Trying to chase rap, gotta move ASAP

尽力赶上节拍，尽快动身

And get a new plan, momma's got a new man

我有了新的计划，妈妈有了新男人

Poor little baby sister, she don't understand

但可怜的小妹她不懂

Sits in front of the TV, buries her nose in the pad

坐在电视前，把她的鼻子埋在垫子里

And just colors until the crayon gets dull in her hand

不停的画，直到蜡笔在她的手里变得同样的沉闷

While she colors her big brother and mother and dad

当她画她的哥哥，妈妈，爸爸时

Ain't no telling what really goes on in her little head

没人知道她小脑袋里到底在想些什么

Wish I could be the daddy that neither one of us had

希望我能成为超越我们父辈的那种父亲

But I keep running from something I never wanted so bad!

但是我一直在试着逃离那些我不曾预料的糟糕事情

Sometimes I get upset, cause I ain't blew up yet

有的时候我变得沮丧，那是因为我还没有爆发

It's like I grew up, but I ain't grow me two nuts yet

就好像我长大了，但仍不是真男人一样

Don't gotta rep my step, don't got enough pep

别斥责我的脚步慢，（我只是）没攒够劲头

The pressure's too much man, I'm just trying to do what's best

男人压力太大了，我只是想尽力做到最好

And I try, sit alone and I cry

我（不断）孤独地尝试，（尽管）噙着泪花

Yo I won't tell no lie, not a moment goes by

我不会说谎，我生命中的每一刻都不会

That I don't pray to the sky, please I'm begging you God

我不会对天祈祷，但上帝我现在要祈求你

Please don't let me be pigeonholed in no regular job

别让我像个没有固定工作的妓女一样可怜

Yo I hope you can hear me homey wherever you are

我期望你无论你是否在我身边都像家人般注视着我

Yo I'm telling you dawg I'm bailing this trailer tomorrow

我现在只想告诉狗一般的你，我只想在明天逃离这个该死的拖车

Tell my mother I love her, kiss baby sister goodbye

告诉妈妈我爱她，临别前吻下小妹

Say whenever you need me baby, I'm never too far

告诉他们，无论何时她们需要我，我都不会离她们太远

But yo I gotta get out there, the only way I know

但是我现在要离开这儿，这是我唯一知道的

And I'mma be back for you, the second that I blow

在我席卷乐坛的一刻，我将归来

On everything I own, I'll make it on my own

我会走自己的路，去赢得（渴望）一切

Off to work I go, back to this 8 Mile Road

一下班我就走，回到八英里路

I'm a man, gotta make a new plan

我是个爷们，我已经制定了个新计划

Time for me to just stand up, and travel new land

是我站起来，去新环境去闯荡的时候了

Time to really just take matters into my own hands

是我用自己的手得到我想要的东西的时候了

Once I'm over these tracks man I'mma never look back (8 Mile Road)

我曾经超越过那些路上（碌碌无为）的人，我一定不能回头看

And I'm gone, I know right where I'm going

我要走了，我已经知道哪里才是我要去的地方了

Sorry momma I'm grown, I must travel alone

对不起妈妈，我长大了，我必须独自去探索

Ain't gonna follow the footsteps I'm making my own

再也不会沿着（别人）脚印走了，我要做我自己

Only way that I know how to escape from this 8 Mile Road

我知道的唯一的方法就是逃离八英里路

You gotta live it to feel it, you didn't you wouldn't get it

你会为了体验它而生存，如果你不那么做你是不会得到你想要的

Or see what the big deal is, why it was and it still is

你会看到什么是我们一直想得到的大生意，为什么它以前不是，可它现在却是了

To be walking this borderline of Detroit city limits

穿梭于底特律城市的边缘线

It's different, it's a certain significance, a certificate

感觉非常与众不同，这个正是重要的、确凿的、可靠的证明

Of authenticity, you'd never even see

你也许绝不会明白

But it's everything to me, it's my credibility

但是这对我来说是一切，这是我的信誉

You never seen heard smelled or met a real MC

你绝不会听见、闻见、或遇见个真实的MC

Who's incredible upon the same pedestal as me

谁都会难以致信，像我这样被人狂热崇拜的人

But yet I'm still unsigned, having a rough time

也曾没有厂牌来签我，（也）会有一段艰苦的岁月

Sit on the porch with all my friends and kick dumb rhymes

坐在货物上和我朋友玩弄着愚蠢的韵律

Go to work and serve MCs in the lunch line

并一起工作，然后排队吃工厂提供的免费午餐

But when it comes crunch time, where do my punchlines go?

但是当吃饭的时间来临的时候,我却想不出的那些精妙的押韵唱给谁听

Who must I show, to bust my flow?

我一定要爆发自己的潜能给谁看

Where must I go? Who must I know?

我该去哪儿，又该认识谁

Or am I just another crab in the bucket?

或许我只是被困在桶里的另外一只螃蟹

Cause I ain't having no luck with this little Rabbit so ***** it

我甚至没有TMD《八英里》的里面的Rabbit幸运

Maybe I need a new outlet, I'm starting to doubt *****t

也许我需要一个新发泄途径，我开始有点怀疑,

I'm feeling a little skeptical who I hang out with

怀疑我是否应该坚持下去

I look like a bum, yo my clothes ain't about *****t

我看上去衣衫褴褛、像个乞丐

At the Salvation Army trying to salvage an outfit

我想像救世军一样去尝试解放芸芸众生

And it's cold, trying to travel this road

不过独自走这条路太艰难了

Plus I feel like I'm on stuck in this battling mode

另外我觉得我有点陷入战斗模式中了,

My defenses are so up, but one thing I don't want

我的防御是那么高, 某些事（只是）我不想做（并不是不能做）

Is pity from no one, the city is no fun

我没有遗憾, 这个城市也毫无乐趣

There is no sun, and it's so dark

这里没有阳光,暗淡又阴冷

Sometimes I feel like I'm just being pulled apart

有时我觉得我要被撕碎了

From each one of my limbs, by each one of my friends

被每个朋友簇拥着，他们拉着我手脚般围在我的身旁

It's enough to just make me wanna jump out of my skin

我受够了，这让我TMD想跳出这副皮囊

Sometimes I feel like a robot, sometimes I just know not

有时我觉得我像个机器人. 有时我都不知道我在做什么

What I'm doing I just blow, my head is a stove top

我只是在冒气，我的头像个已烧开水的壶盖

I just explode, the kettle gets so hot

困扰我的太多了， 我的头都快爆炸了

Sometimes my mouth just overloads the ass that I don't got

有时我的嘴确实说了些我未曾体验到的的酸楚

But I've learned, it's time for me to U-turn

但是我已经想通了, 是到我人生掉头的时刻了

Yo it only takes one time for me to get burned

这只是我的一次受伤, 而不是堕落

Ain't no falling no next time I meet a new girl

不会有下次了, 我会邂逅一个新的女孩

I can no longer play stupid or be immature

我将再也不会那么蠢, 也不会那么嫩了

I got every ingredient, all I need is the courage

我有一切必要的品格, 我现在只是需要勇气

Like I already got the beat, all I need is the words

我已经准备去战斗了, 所需要的就只是一些话来鞭策

Got the urge, suddenly it's a surge

有了这种强烈愿望，突然间（内心）就会像浪潮般奔腾汹涌

Suddenly a new burst of energy has occurred

于是突然一种新的力量在我身体中迸发了

Time to show these free world leaders the 3 and a third

是到了让那些free world的SB看看时间的时侯了

I am no longer scared now, I'm free as a bird

我再也不会恐惧了,我像鸟一样的自由

Then I turn and cross over the median curb

于是我转身跃过了人群中的极限

Hit the 'burbs and all you see is a blur from 8 Mile Road

猛烈回击（质疑我的言论），（因为）你所见的（我的过去）只不过是八英里路上（那些毫不足道的）污点而已

I'm a man, gotta make a new plan

我是个爷们,我已经制定了个新计划

Time for me to just stand up, and travel new land

是我站起来，去新环境去闯荡的时候了

Time to really just take matters into my own hands

是我用自己的手得到我想要的东西的时候了

Once I'm over these tracks man I'mma never look back (8 Mile Road)

我曾经超越过那些路上（碌碌无为）的人，我一定不能回头看

And I'm gone, I know right where I'm going

我要走了，我已经知道哪里才是我要去的地方了

Sorry momma I'm grown, I must travel alone

对不起妈妈，我长大了，我必须独自去探索

Ain't gonna follow the footsteps I'm making my own

再也不会沿着（别人）脚印走了，我要做我自己

Only way that I know how to escape from this 8 Mile Road

我知道的唯一的方法就是逃离八英里路

扩展资料：

歌手Eminem演唱的这首歌曲《8?Mile》的歌曲总时长为6分钟，歌手发行的《8?Mile》专辑之中收纳了这首歌曲，专辑于2002年1月1日开始发行，专辑包含了16首歌曲。这首歌曲也是该专辑的主打歌曲。

《8?Mile》这首歌曲也是歌手的众多优秀作品之一，这首歌曲发行之后，深受歌迷的追捧。歌手Joey?Mizers?/?Papa Doc演唱这首歌曲，收纳于其专辑《NOTHIN'BUT !LLUSION》之中，专辑收纳了9首歌曲。专辑于2016奶奶11月15日开始发行。